Help?

I really, really, really want to finish this story, but what I keep doing is writing and trimming back and writing and trimming back. I know where I want it to go, but it turns out that it really is Kent/Neil friendship fic, and there's not even going to be kissing (but there is the threat of kissing, which makes it even worse), and I just need someone to read it and tell me it's not utter shit and that I should keep going and post eventually (and if for no other reason than because I have made a soundtrack that I love a lot and soleta has made beautiful cover art for it).

I have other writing assignments due, dammit, and I just know if I don't finish this first it will never get finished.

Does anyone have the time to get on gchat or go into googledocs and coo at me a bit? Pretty please?