Huh. I just read that comment. I'm... in disagreement with her about calling Peter's talking to Neal a "chewing out" - that's a misinterpretation of what you've written (INTERROGATING THE TEXT FROM THE WRONG PERSPECTIVE OMG) and it's actually someone I bet bashes Peter for being mean to Neal. But I wouldn't say that. I'm sure you've responded to it by now, though, so no worries.
ETA: ahahaha, and reading your response, I realize I don't think you missed ANYTHING - I totally got exactly what you were going for, you were plenty clear. Not everyone is going to get it, but I totally did, so it's not a complete miss, not at all.
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ETA: ahahaha, and reading your response, I realize I don't think you missed ANYTHING - I totally got exactly what you were going for, you were plenty clear. Not everyone is going to get it, but I totally did, so it's not a complete miss, not at all.